There is a rising star in our midst. Jacob Rosenberg shows a great talent in using words to exactly describe his thoughts. He reminds me of Hemingway who once said: “The difference between the right word and the perfect word is like the difference between a fly and a firefly.”
Yes, he has a long road ahead of him to master the art of writing, but I am sure he will. His talents are evident in this poignant short tale. Of course it could be improved, but let us forget that this is without editing or coaching; this makes this tale more effective on many levels.
Readers: You Decide:
This is Dr. Sabri g. Bebawi